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simpleplan13 2008-05-25 . chapter 1
I love your use of ellipses in the third line because that's exactly how someone would say something like that. I like the ending because its very empowering.

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Breaks-like-crystal 2008-05-25 . chapter 1
I like the poem a lot. Took me a little while to work out the rhyming pattern though, but that's probably just me being dim. :)
Edensong 2008-05-25 . chapter 1
I can't put my finger on it, but there's something I really liked about this poem. You have captured angst perfectly and spun it with whimsy, to create a sweet, melt-in-your-mouth humor/angst cotton candy. Anyway, very nice.
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