It was pretty amusing. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~

Poor closet monster. I love how I can just picture him, sadly hanging his head as yet another child refuses to be scared-- it's so true, in modern times, that such a monster would be out of a job! Your rhythm is great, perfect for a monster that preys on childrens' fears, and, well...what am I saying, it's all great!
My only complaint is that in the beginning the lines seem rather forced. The rhymes are awkward, and I don't quite get why the monster wants to make children run-- where is there to go?
--Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)

Aww, poor monster! =P

I love the combination of horror and humor, and I like some points the monster makes, such as today's children watching too many horror movies.

'I usually can’t get a good-paying job
with a face that looks like raw meat' - those lines made me laugh.

Great job!

The monster had such a serious air I felt quite bad for him. Very subtle, clever rhyming, great topic, very well written.