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i thought this was pretty funny... i liked how you personified logic in the end - it was a nice image. :)

i thought that your line breaks were a bit much... you need stanzas or something... like the thought process never broke even though there were new topics.

overall, though, good job. :) keep writing!

-Lefty

I love it! I relate almost too much (though I wish that I, too, could find a method to use int eh back of my head) and love how humorously you've portrayed this truly crappy situation.
I can't really think of a criticism, besides that I don't like the word association in the middle, where you go from letters to chains to bounds. It seems like too much of a stretch, if you're going to linger on the features of the chains. There's got to be a more sense-making way to the solution, right?
--Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)

Not sure about some of the shorter sentences. Some lines might make more sense if you put the two into one line.

Otherwise I really like it