I really like this, it reminds me of someone I know. Very good ending too loved it! Good job!

~Sammy

I did not like some of those lines 'cause they seemed a bit long and awkward with the flow. I really like the beginning because it's very sweet and well done. I also like how you give instructions and why, nice job.

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