I loved this. Peace.

This is the most beautiful poem I have ever read.

I like the surreal feel to this poem, distant yet highly relatable. We've all had little breakdown moments when we long for the past. I like the word "fall" which has a tint of falling down, falling into a trap. It's probably not how you intended, but love is vague in itself and that's the beauty of it xD

Lovely poem!

This was excellent, I love how simple this piece is and yet it has so much emotion. Great job. Keep it Up!

Very cute and sad. This is just plain awsome. Hope it works out for you. Adding to C2!

xKristie Mariex

I liked how you expressed yourself, as well as your setup.

I liked how you repeated some words. The only thing I miss, is if you could use metaphors to express yourself more easily, and make the poem stand out more from the other love poems.

The Reverse Edge Blade

Aw... that was beautiful. It's got that bittersweet feeling. It reminds me of the (slightly overused) saying, "You never know what you got until it's gone." It's really quite well-written. Chat later. -Qzie

You can really feel the desperation in this piece, nice wording.

So beautiful...

Absolutely beautiful!

I feel like I can relate a lot to this piece - possibly why I like it so much. Your words here seem like lyrics to me, and whether they are meant to be, or not, I still find this to be beautifully written.

This poem is a great example of simplicity both in love and desire. You really created a treasured feeling between a lover and the loved, although creating the loved anonymity would've been better. Saying that the loved would be loved even if they were with another sort of takes the mystery and feeling away from this otherwise nameless love.

Aside from a few mechanics errors near the end, this was a good poem. It wasn't too special, but it was heartfelt, and a good read. Thumbs-up.