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| mad-one123 2008-08-02 ch 3,  | abusei read this story a while back, and im pretty sure i forgot to review. im really enjoying it. i love your characters, especially adrian. his lonliness and isolation from everyone is sad. im glad casey has popped into his life. im extremely excited for an update! im always continuously checking like everyday, cause im a noob. so yeah! weo |
| blackoblivion13 2008-07-05 ch 3, | abuseAw... Poor Adrian... He's dad is never home and he's always alone... I feel bad for him. That was good by the way!! > |
| plumblossom 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThis _is_ a promising story. It has some of my favorite elements too (not necessarily the rich people part, but the isolate and the extrovert, that's nice). And I'm glad to see you're planning to update "someday Soon" someday soon . . . |
| Isidris Gry 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseI'm just like Adrian, lol. Casey is definiltly good for him, otherwise, he'd never get anywhere! I really like Maria too, she's a good person. Hope everything's going well for you as far as Someday Soon goes. |
| taylor 2008-06-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love this story, I can't wait for your update. |
| Pretty. Odd 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseaw. poor adrian. I love him and casey though. they're adorable. they need to get crushes on eachother, like soon :D |
| glitter.in.my.eye 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseI really like this story so far. The bickering between Adrian and Casey makes me smile and Cassidy sounds like an adorable type of annoying. All of your characters sound wonderful! and i wanna know what's up with that note in Adrian's locker. C: |
| magalina 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseXD I like Casey. Cassidy too...for now -.- Yay for updates! |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseI have a feeling Cassidy is supposed to be annoying...but I love her XD She's just so cute! And Casey makes me laugh a lot, as usual. Poor, poor Adrian...two people are latched onto him in a matter of days...and don't look like they're going to be letting go anytime soon! But The Diner? Yeah, that place sounds terrifying. On every level. No wonder Adrian didn't want to go. And I love Maria, too. She's just so nice ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Sychaeus 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abusebwa ha ha ha. I love him. I love them both. I ma so full of love! haha! hum. Yes. I like it, and yeah. Maria's awesome. |
| Esquirella 2008-06-19 ch 3, | abuseI like your characters. |
| xXxBathedInBloodxXx 2008-06-19 ch 3, | abuseWow..Cassidy is so much like the girls in my school it's scary. First, they seem shy and then WHAM! They're a whole different person! An annoying freak of a person..0.o Nightmares...Update soon!~ XD |
| Rainbowelectric 2008-06-10 ch 2, | abuseDear God how I love your "voice" This has such a lovely flow. And your dialogue is absolutely spectacular. And I don't think Adrian is generic. Especially since it's just the first chapter. It's beautiful characterization and I'm sure as you continue (and you truly must) more of his character will be revealed. As I mentioned, absolutely lovely. Your words are stunning. |
| xXxBathedInBloodxXx 2008-06-02 ch 2, | abuseCasey is such a bad boy!~ I love him already! Great chapter, update soon! XD |
| Feel The Waltz 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseI like the look of this so far :) |