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Reviews For: Nights

wolfblood82 2008-08-22 ch 1,	abuseHeyo! :) Anyway, glad to review you again. :) Ok, first things first, I'll have to say that this is actually your best one-shots here. I like the way you input humane traits much more stronger in this one. Just one issue I've got here is that maybe you can try doing a scene on the male lead as well and not just focusing on the female lead. In this way, I believe the readers will feel more for the story on the whole. Anyway, interesting short here. For a second, I feared this will turn out to be an ending of tragedy with an open-ended kind of finish, which is what I don't want to see personally. Anyway, thanks very much for your reviews on Wolfblood. Hope to see more of them soon! ^^ Bye! :)
brittle hearts 2008-08-08 ch 1,	abuseA lovely take on a well-known story. Yours is the type of story that one would never tire of reading. Brilliant work!
eshlie 2008-07-23 ch 1, anon.	abusecontinue writing. i love it :)
AmareAgape 2008-07-15 ch 1,	abuseHey, that was great! I think what kept me reading after the initial attention grabber was your narrative style. Your writing is so natural and flowing, almost poetic in its simplicity and beauty. I dunno how to describe it any other way. You really captured the sense of desperation and longing without extending the rant/angst too long or being overly wordy. :D
faery tragedy 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseThis was so endearing! I'm not familiar with Arabian Nights, but I got the gist of it, thanks to Disney. The first lines completely pull--no, yank--the reader in. Your dialog is very natural. It doesn't sound contrived at all. I also liked how the importance of storytelling is expanded upon as the story progresses. Wonderful job! I'm adding this to my favorites. *faery tragedy
jaded image 2008-06-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really enjoyed this, especially how their relationship progressed. I loved Arabian Nights, and I thought this was really well-written :)
Teffie 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseI really love this. It was funny and sad and moving in turn. I loved the line about mermaids, aka "sea princesses." I noticed one typo: "The winds were harsh, however, and they blew the sand into her eyes, causing her to loose track of her Lord." "Loose" should be "lose." I'm adding this to my favorites, and I hope to see more of your work in the future!
JamieBell 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseNice rewrite. I enjoyed it the first time, but this is really sweet as well! Good work!
Jainblu 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseI've never read Arabian Nights, the only thing I know about it is linked to the little I can remember of Alladin. :) However, i very much enjoyed this. It was thought provoking in away. It reminded me somewhat of one of my mantras, embracing life's dips and falls for the sake of the peaks and rises. :) a job well done I'd say.
Bookbook 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseAw! I recently reread Arabian Nights, and so I'm familiar with the plotline, but you developed Shaharazad (I can't spell it) and the king (I can't remember his name) into real people, instead of just fairy-tale-characters with no personality. Well done!

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