This story was very adorable and fun to read. I'm super glad I clicked on it. :3

okay i still love this story. it's beautiful. i love the idea you've you've put behind it, the storytelling motif, and it's just... i really like it :)

Very nice idea. Love it.

Ri

I like this. Very nice. :)

very cute. Good job. :)

Aww this is sweet. I enjoyed it alot :)

i love Arabian Nights! that story is so romantic! i love ur story too =)

The ending is good. I enjoyed this story, but actually I wanted to comment on your note about Scherezade. I was just wondering if you had ever read a book titled "Shadow Storyteller" (i'm actually not sure if that was the title). It was about a story teller that helped Scherezade find new stories when she was about to run out ( and so die...). the stories told there also had to do with mer-people. Eh, I just found that amusing/interesting/coincidental..
Thank you!

"...the deset wind raking across the sands below."
Should this be "desert", instead of "deset"?

"he did not wait to here the end of her story"
Wrong kind of "here". You want "hear".

Aside from that, this was a cute story. And interesting. So, is the whole story-telling thing true, then? I'm not really good with history/geography related things. In a weird way, this reminded me of Pocahontas. O.o Strange.

You're a good writer. Keep up the good work.
(I plan on reading "My Darling Talia" SOMEtime soon. Bear with me. Haha.) =P

I loved it. Although I must admit I am disappointed that it is not to be continued, I also loved A thousand and one nights. You are a very talented story teller

I am extremely pleased to find you. I know that sounds creeper-tastic, but I was just checking out the communities and stumbled upon this gem. Not only is it well-written, but it's interesting as well. After the first few paragraphs, I realized it was based on the concept of Scherezade, which is totally okay by me because it reminded me of a book that I owned that was something like it. Now I want to go find that book!

Ha. But yeah, I have no complaints about this, just love. The ending was really cute and cheeky, too.

I've always really liked the Arabian Nights stories, and the frame story. But this was much gentler than that king beheading all those women.

This is great and has a very unique spin!

- Rebekah

Very clever and sweet. :D

This is brilliant--it shines.