That was so cute! I especially enjoyed the ending with Olive stepping in the gum. It just made me laugh. Thanks for this

Can I just say I am SO glad that I found this? This has to be one of the best one-shots I've ever read, and it's even from the perspective of a guy (I usually only read stories from a girl's POV, because hey, I am one). Olive makes me laugh and I love her jokes ("I don't appreciate your cheek!" xD) and her personality and I love Sheridan's valiant struggle against those compelling lips of hers. This is just made of awesome-sauce! :D

Aw. I love how it begins and ends with the gum. And the point it makes. And the "okay then" and her lips and his cheek. His cheek and her sense of humour especially. maybe his cheek a bit more. 'Cause I APPRECIATE it! buahhaha..

It's spastic. Fantastic... You know, once you start writing those words that end at "tic" you just can't stop it!

Either way. Adorable!

Really.

...enjoy

Loved it ^^

Incredibly cute story. I loved it. :)

Hilarious...Sheridan is kind of dense, but in a good way. :)

adorable one shot!
n its just too funny!!lol

Aww. I can't believe I hadn't read this yet!
It's adorable!
I freaking love Olive. She is so funny!
Even if her jokes are pretty corny.
That's what makes her so COOL! Haha.
Kudos to you for yet another amazing work of awesomeness. :)

Your buddy,
Kyllex

Cute.

aw, that was very sweet. i love it, it was great. sheridan is... well, he's an idiot, but in a very very good way, i think. olive is weird, but you know, freaks of nature make the best main characters. i feel like i say that to everyone. well, i do, actually, becaus everybody's characters are freaks of nature, so... yeah.

but i loved it. it was amazing.

Okay then, this is just about the funniest and sweetest oneshots I've ever read.
So, yeah, I loved it. It's abso-**-lutely brilliant!

Cute story.

aw how cute!! =)

aww this is so cute! ♥
great job, i love how they've rubbed off of each other in the end :)

That was adorable :)
Loved it!
-Aria