I like the italic part a lot.

oh frick this is a good one.

i literally want to quote almost every line. like the second stanza starts off with "Let's fly to the moon my sunshine boy" and already i'm falling in love with the poem

you also rhyme in this which makes the poem even more special.

"So hold your head steady, this isn't you happy ending/You better get ready 'cause this heart can't take much more mending" - excellent poem

and thanks for your review(s?); i've been gone a while too :]

I liked the references to nature in this song. Good work.

~SirScott