This was great. Blessed be the challenger.

Kudos to you for effectively delivering a one-shot.

Love it.

I'm not surprised.

I always love your stories

aww...loved it. :)

loved it! your an amazing writer

Aw, such a cute story. Keep up the good work!

i really liked this story. but im confused on one part. where you say "She smiled embarrassedly, deciding that she should keep what she saw to herself." are u talking about her seeing his employees?

*squeals and falls of chair* That was so sweet! YAY! Coolest one-shot ever! I love the story! I think I like the fact that they are older too much better.

... .god.

who cares if you didn't meet the requirements?

this was BEYOND amazing. D

loved it!

and the quote was 'AW' beyond belief.

lol.

-lqd

Aww so cute. Wow you described everything so well. I wish I could do it that well.

That was really really good! The emotions were beautiful and...it was just really good.

Kicon

aw! that was so cute. i loved it:D