Good story! There are some spelling errors, but nothing major. Just a tiny bit more detail would've been nice, especially towards the end with the battle scene and all that. With more detail, this could very easily become a novel. I loved the plot and the characters were funny and original. Great job!

Really good story--filled with adventure and a sense of bravery!

I loved enering the world of dragons!

Please continue writing. And maybe you could write a sequal...idk...thats me blabbing...

Midnight-Wolfe

It's really good.

I loved your story. Character depth was clear and detail was used. It was a very enjoyable and fascinating read. I was entranced.

p.s. I am glad she got to see Moto again! Good Job on your story!