|Reviews for Protection, Inc|
| Mardy-Bum-Barrel-Of-A-Gun 5/29/08 . chapter 5
I like this story. It's far more interesting than most on this site. I loved the last line. Can't wait to read more.
| elizabeth73 5/28/08 . chapter 4
Wow! Love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next! Fate is fantastic!
| cbprice25 5/28/08 . chapter 4
Ah! I'm all a-twitter. It can get a tad confusing at times; some more minor description may be needed (had to re-read Lucian's entrance to make sense of it).
Looking forward to more!
| cbprice25 5/27/08 . chapter 2
Intriguing. Nicely set scene, and I'm very interested to find out more of their world.