I like this story. It's far more interesting than most on this site. I loved the last line. Can't wait to read more.

Wow! Love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next! Fate is fantastic!

Ah! I'm all a-twitter. It can get a tad confusing at times; some more minor description may be needed (had to re-read Lucian's entrance to make sense of it).

Looking forward to more!

Intriguing. Nicely set scene, and I'm very interested to find out more of their world.