Let me jump right into this and say how much I really enjoyed the dialogue and the character interaction; the balance between each was perfect. Also, the way the demise of the apple was described helped with the visualization of the scene. Wonderful work with pacing the discoveries of Imrad's preference, ability, and overall personality. Nothing felt rushed, and the way you went about the establishing of other characters' personalities was a great touch. Beautiful work, all in all.
Sincerely,
~September's Nobara.

I like this one, too. Very sweet, it made me smile! I liked seeing Anthony and Jamie at the end, too!

Ah, I love this story. In fact I liked it so much I had to read it again. It was really well done, thank you for posting this.

Oh, I loved this story as well! I absolutely adore the way you write, making the reader feel the feelings of the characters... Someday, I'll be able to do that, too :)

I think I'll end up faving all of your stories if this keeps up... but I doubt you mind, eh?

Thank you for this reading pleasure, see you on a next story I decide to read! ;)

so...cute... words are not enough.

I have to say I very much loved reading this story. Very well written with strong characterisations and definitely not your typical slash fiction. Loved it XD

aw soo cute, i'm so glad they got their happy ending :)

Aw, I don't want it to be over...

But it was definitely good while it lasted :)!

I'm going to miss these characters. Looking back I can't believe I didn't guess the whole telepathy thing. And I was surprised and pleased that Cain wasn't a raging psycho. It made me fuzzy inside when he accepted the fact that Imrad had moved on. It was especially nice 'cause it wasn't the cliche "omg best friend is obsessed and ** rapes unwilling main character!"

I love, love, LOVED it!
Is there any way that there will be a story centered on Miguel and Vane :0? 'Cause I really want to know if anything ever happens there xD!

-Nub

I have to say, I like this story a lot more now that I've read it completely. I had the inkling that Marcus was a mage or something too, but after the mirror-wall-noir scenario I dismissed it. Nice way to turn me all around... And you thanked me at the end, I'm all happy now : ) I can't wait for your next story!

K.Z. Langford

AWESOME WORK!

GAH! >.<

i don't know who to be mad at anymore! first Imrad, then Cain, now Marcus?!?!? lol, this story is so gripping!

o this just keeps getting better and better :)
loving the plot twist :)

I have to admit that this story is slower than your others, but in a good way. It gives you time to think and woner what wil happen next. I think that the relationship between Imrad and Marcus needs to be built up a little more, as they were basically just suddenly in love. That's not a bad thing of course, but a bit jarring when the catalyst Cain was introduced. As for Cain, I'm not sure his character is likeable but he's not exactly unlikeable either. My guess is that this is purposeful; you want the readers to feel that Cain might just have a chance just like Cain believes. I was wondering how Marcus reacted to finding out that Imrad was an Abnormal? There was so much build-up that Imrad created, it was confusing when nothing happened. Of course, I can guess that Marcus just didn't say anything and accepted it; that seems to be his personality. I really like this story and am sorry I haven't reviewed on your other chapters- long hours at the Humane Society had me exhausted. Thanks for this chapter, I'm waiting for the next one!

K.Z. Langford

this is really good!! keep going!! =P

oh I just want Imrad to claw Cain's eyes out lol!