Wow...I knew, just as soon as Katie offered to go get the pregnancy test, and especially after she promised not to say anything about Lily, that the press would end up finding out. And I know it's just to fuel the plot of the story, but Katie, c'mon...with her luck, she should've known that disaster would happen. Though I had no clue she would end up putting herself in the hospital.

Well, onto other things that happened...I liked seeing Hal jealous over Ryan Houser, though what he said about her being desperate was so beyond low and offensive. I hope, before the end of this story, that he apologizes for his comments. Katie at least deserves that much.

Ahh, I can't tell you how much I've missed both Katie and her mother's fantastic one-liners! And I surely will miss them even more after this story is over. :(

Ugh, the backlash from everyone seeing her buy the tests and wrecking the car is sure to end her and Hal's public relationship. I wonder what else will ensue from the "scandal?" She won't be the good girl anymore, I'm guessing.

And what a jerk that James was...if it really is his M.O. to go after girls for sex, surely he would have enough sense to wear a condom, right?

this chapter just made me so so sad! could you at least post the next chapter real soon? when will it be up? i dont care if the grammar or the spelling is wrong i just need to know what happens next :( :( :( :( :( i love you and yours story. you're absolutely intelligent

This story is pretty great! Katie is so hilarious,seriously. Although the mistakes are a bit annoying, the story line and awesome characters more than make up for that!

the last part in the hospital was so heart wrenching. Hal is being so confusing! But he loves her, right? Right?

I hope you update soon, this is an awesome story!

omg! you seriously have to update soon now! i will not wait anylonger! this is getting good :D i hope lily feels bad for making it look like Katie is buyin pregnancy tests for herself :P

I just have to tell you again that I love this story and your characters. They say the craziest things and I always find myself busting out laughing. Seriously? Have you ever thought of going into the comedy business? Is there even such a thing? It's sad to know you won't be continually posting on FP after this is done since I really love your writing! hehe Thank you for updating, I absolutely cannot wait for the ending!

love love love! thanks for this special christmas treat! thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one

OH MY JELLY BEAN :D

forget about my thumbs you POSTED! YAY

and I am experiencing mixed feelings here since I am happy that Hal and Katie will hopefully resolve this sad situation but I am also deeply saddened by the fact that it will be over and that you may not return to FP after. I think your writing is awesome! the creme de la creme and I hoped you would continue writing. I cannot wait for the next chapters please take the time you need to complete it because seeing as this is the end I know it will be worth the wait!

Good Luck in the future and thank you so very very much for this story it makes my mouth awkwardly rearrange itself in a grin that resembles a rabid dog :) Because when I read about these two I tend to gain this unattractive look on my face that I would call my daydream spacing out face but others would call it the CALL 911 SHE MAY HAVE BRAIN DAMAGE

see what reading your story in public does to me?

HAHA

Have a HAPPY NEW YEAR!

- Amanda S

You got a point there(:

Well this is quite a long story, but i've loved every single bit of it!

How many chapters are there going to be total?

Oh that crash was perfect. I loved that you added it, and for FictionRose for suggesting it;D

AMAZING chapter.

18* that cliff!

I want more more more chappies!

Wah, i was so touched by the progress u know, all

the misundestandings and misconceptions and all! Wah poor little

girl...( Hahahhahaha, still im excited to know what will happen next! Du! Dun!)

Oh my god this is possibly the GREATEST STORY ON GODS GREEN EARTH. Seriously, I'm hyperventilating. You need to update ESPECIALLY IF ITS DONE. you are honest to goodness killing me. Do you want that kind of blood on your hands? Hm?

Xylophone

I loved this chapter! I really want to know what's going through Hal's head! Is he a jerk or is he torn?

I feel really bad for Katie. I hope everything will make sense on the next chapter. XD

SUCH a good update! Ahh I can't wait for the rest of this! Sad to think it'll be done soon :(

Hi. Its so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) Oh dear. Poor Katie. :( I don't understand why Katie won't talk with her mum about Hal. It'll be good for Katie to talk with someone about it. :( OMG Katie ask Ruby to drive her to school. How come Katie never got her licence L and get her own car instead? :S Why is Hal is in foul mood and is snapping everyone who cross in his way? What happen to Hal? Is it because of Katie who wants to sleep with him? :S OMG Katie is in love with Hal. No wonder she don't want him to hate her more. :( OMG Ryan is kiss Katie and got bust by Hal. Does Ryan wants Katie for himself? :S OMG Katie's grandma come for visit. Thats great. :D OMG Hal finally told his mum that he don't want to be business owner but want to be actor. Yay! Its important to follow your heart and your dreams to become to be as. No matter what they say to you and only one is you to listen to your heart to make right decisions that will be no regret in the future. :) OMG Lily slept with James then he dump her. Why? :S Poor Lily. :( OMG Is Lily pregnant? :S Ah Juno is great movie. :D I am so glad that Lily ask Katie for help. :) OMG Katie got in car accident. Thats bad. Oh no. I hope that Katie's okay. *worried* Yay! Katie's okay now. Phew! :D What's wrong with Hal's attitude? :S Are Hal and Katie split up after they goes to college? :S Ah Hal's grandma is come for visit. How interesting. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D I am enjoy read this story and I love it. Please update soon. :) Merry christmas and happy new year. Wish you have a great relaxing holiday. Be safe and well. Enjoy the christmas with your family and your friends. :) Take care. Have fun *hugs* mwa xo PS Your ideas are great and its amazing chapter. :D

YAY! I nearly jumped out of my seat when I saw you had actually finished writing it _ I absolutely loved this story, Katie is hilarious and so quirky! Keep up the great writing!