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| Lexi Matthews 2008-09-07 ch 5,  | abuseThese're awesome! |
| october lies 2008-09-05 ch 1, | abusemost of the times i see some cussing, it's used in such a way that it ruins the poem. but here, that's definitely not the case. i love "i will haunt you, shitless" it just amuses me, slightly |
| Shizuky 2008-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI think it's a kind of rage in it. I like the few words you use to express the emotions. It's not a cuty sweeti poem and that's a plus, cause you are able to write more than just one sort of poems! *hug* |
| x day x dreamer x 2008-08-29 ch 2, | abuseI like it :) And make the power of my middle finger last. I love that line particularly. saara x. |
| When Twilight Fades 2008-08-24 ch 1, | abuseLove it. xD The repetition works nicely to create that sort of hourglass effect. Nice work. :.When Twilight Fades.: |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-08-16 ch 5, | abuseCould see where the rhymes were going, but the last line surprised me and made me laugh anyway ^^ Sweet. |
| OneSweetLove 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the mix of two opposite things. good job, even though I don't get the whole thing :) |
| Uaohre 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abusei don't understand at all...but i think maybe someone you hated will died ugly... |
| kloun doll 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI like every word from this, it's passionate |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseInsane and angry, but I like em ^^ Especially like the second part... haha that just amuses me. You mixed religion with cuss words quite well =D Love the second line in particular, "And make the power of my middle finger last." Seriously, that's just awesome ^^ |
| Isca 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseYou definitely show a command of emotion in your writing. Great work! |