Sorry it took so long for me to get back to this. I'm really liking this story. You're doing great with showing Anabelle for example, personality and traits. It was good and I like that pirate touch it has.

Well I've finally got around to reviewing some of your stories. I owe it to you after all you did for Corago: Volume I. Anyways this was very good, I was surprised you don't have more reviews. Good to see story take place in Canada. You did well on the stories title. Maybe it's just me but pirates seem to draw me to stories.

Ok ... so the pirates were a dream? Huh. Blah that Anna and Alan died! So didn't see that one coming! And yay, John didn't turn out to be a creep! lol, I have a bad track record with Johns ^_< Very cool story, I really loved it!! Awesome work! ^_^

Awe, John left! I've never liked Johns ... lol, now I'm hoping that he doesn't turn out the same way all of the Johns I've known did ^_< But anyway, getting off that little tangent - Is Anna crazy? Should she be seeing a shrink? Or is she really a pirate who has a very sexy Captain after her? Can't wait to find out!!

Yay, go Anna! Show that Captain that a girl can be just as good as a guy! Awesome stuff, but I am beginning to really wonder which world is the real one, and which is fake ... or if either one is fake ... or, for that matter, what the hell is going on ^_< Next chapter!

This story sounds really interesting. I can see the Pirates of the Caribbean influence! Especially the Captain's "devilish smile." :)
I noticed a few mistakes, mostly with commas:

“Anna(,) you better get up or you’ll be late for the first day back!”

“Coming(,) mother!”

"Please stand (for?) O Canada."

"After scarfing down her homemade ham (sandwich)"

""Is anything wrong?” he asked(,) concerned."

"I swear to god(,) John, I could almost taste the salty spray"

"Annabelle(,) on the other hand(,) wanted adventure"

I liked how the students call their teacher "Old Man Winter"! That was quite funny. I'll be back to read more later! I hope to see more of the captain with the devilish smile.

John sounds a bit fishy ... like he knows something about her dream world ... I had an idea that he might be William ^_< I dunno, but either way I really like this story! Hope to see more soon!!

You know, Anna and Jamie sound a aweful lot like Mara and me. Mara has wicked cool dreams - continuous dreams at that - all of the time, and she always tells me about them. I've tried writing them, but they get so complicated after a while ... I usually just skim them for ideas ^_< Anyway, next chapter! ^_^