well i can't find anything that suits me!
but i'm liking this one xP

AH! are you gunna do more robbie boy's pov?!?!

i see what's going on here. robbie making a deal with talia now? oh backstabber!
can't wait to see what happens next

awesome chappy. robbie is so adorable! i'm wondering what rob's up to! =)
Update sooN!

Okay, a couple things:
First, I'm upset and annoyed with myself 'cause I've had an idea similar to this premise floating around in my head for a while and other than writing a couple things down, it has not gotten very far at all. But, oh well, that's my downfall. At least there are, so far, clear differences between our two plot lines.

ANYWAY, I'm amused by Chase's point of view. However, it can be confusing, especially, the first interaction between Rob and Chase - it was hard to follow and could probably benefit from some clarification. Of course, I may be the only one who is "confused" aka "slow" so, who knows?

Also, I find it hillarious that Chase pines for a girl who is dating an autistic boy. So sad and pathetic on Chase's part. I just want to point out that just because someone is autistic it doesn't necessarily mean they are retarded. As I understand it, it has more to do with social interactions than intelligence. So is Talia's boyfriend actually retarded? I guess I'll have to read on to find out. Keep up the good work! :)

like it. seems like it's going to get pretty good very soon. rob is such a hot character :P

wa! this story is great, so funny! i love chase. thank you!
can't wait for the new chapter ^^

You finally updated! I love this story so far, hope you write soon!

haha god i like leo's character and it looks as if it's gonna get interesting.
can't wait till next chapter

love it. please update soon!

AH! MY ARMS STUCK!...oh, okay, i'm good
OMG! YOU UPDATED! FINALLY!
hurry up and get to the good stuff!!
and it better NOT take you long to update or else...i'll steal your cookie!

i love this story, please keep working on it! can't wait to read the next chapters! good job!

Can’t wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!! Just a suggestion, that it would be great if you could be a little bit more descriptive.

love this story more and more.
update soon!

funny :P

Yay your sequel is up! I like the chapters so far update soon ! :D