   .Jazz in December. 2008-07-18 . chapter 2omg. cute. |
 Deji-loves-you 2008-07-07 . chapter 2Ah! Interesting...
Good chapter. Short and sweet~ The kiss part was funny. xD Oren is an awesome babbler. |
| .Jazz in December. 2008-06-22 . chapter 1 *giggles* oh god, I love this story. Yay Dain! |
| Deji-loves-you 2008-06-12 . chapter 1 sdhjgfds
Kay, I dunno when you wrote this but w/e.
This is pretty cool. xD Love the last part. It sounds good so far. |
 Crabs 2008-06-06 . chapter 1Woah, go you dude! x3
This is really kinda cute, and I can see the plot unfolding already. Might be way cool to explore it!~
In any case, awesome. YAYFUTURISTICWORLDS. x3 |
 Adenil 2008-05-28 . chapter 1You should defiently countinue this. :) You have great plot, even for a first chapter. I can picture the world you've created, and I like it. Do you plan to countinue? |
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