   mybigteddybearemmett 2009-11-04 . chapter 18Great job! |
 Opheliac in Me 2009-10-19 . chapter 18gah! update |
 Vulpine Ninja 2009-10-17 . chapter 18Well, the sex part is hot, and Danny is sweet. But, overall most of the time the story is a lil mundane. No offense though. I've been waiting for a climax as I read (or some sort of cliffhanger), but then again the story has not ended yet.
Even so, I'm curious to know what will happen to those two. So please do update (although if my review seems a lil too late) |
 kerryannh 2009-10-06 . chapter 18Very good story. I love your use of dialogue. It makes the story very realistic. I hope that Saul does not leave Danny to go live with Greg. It sounds like bad things could happen involving alcohol and cheating. I can understand Saul's desire to get away from his mother and Andrew. I a hope Saul does not get abused again. It is so sad that his mother never paid enough attention to him to realize that he was being molested. So sad. Iam looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good writing. |
 Deaths.Last.Prayer 2009-09-19 . chapter 18Love it, can't wait for the next chapter. |
 littlemischief 2009-08-13 . chapter 18Great story. A real pleasure to read. See you at the next chapter!
Bonne continuation: ) |
 Rachizzle 2009-07-18 . chapter 18 Totally knew that was coming. I mean, I knew he was gonna end up staying with Greg, haha. Hmm. Why was Danny there? Looking for Saul? :O!
Great chapter, as usual. |
 Dramatizer 2009-07-05 . chapter 18Saul-twitter = awesome. |
 Naomi Schemer 2009-07-03 . chapter 18Well, I'm glad I'm still here. Excellent chapter, and I wouldn't mind reading whatever Saul felt like Twitting. |
 Iconic 2009-06-29 . chapter 18I am very glad for the update. I seriously love this story! Really, it's great. I am very interested to see how things progress from here; how will Saul and Danny make a relationship work, will living with Greg be to tempting for Saul...So many questions, but I guess I'm just going to have to wait for the answere until you update again. So please, sooner is better. You rock. |
 lalaland22 2009-06-28 . chapter 18Please update more...that chapter had me really hoping for a Saul and Greg thing. lol I know , i know he has Danny but a girl can hope.lol |
 Carpeediem. 2009-06-28 . chapter 18I really love this story :D
I read all of it in just a few hours xD
Can't wait to see more of this! |
 Faith Adeline 2009-06-27 . chapter 18I liked it. Keep it up and update soon (:
Faith |
 Tigaroo 2009-06-27 . chapter 18i like. |
 homepage 2009-06-26 . chapter 18:]Nice to know you didn't give up. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
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