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| Quill of Copper 2008-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Best first-chapter ever :D Only one question.. why do you have ""speech" instead of ol' "speech" every time someone starts talking, you have two quote marks instead of just one, great story though, really well... typed :) |
| October Story 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseHey, i just wanted to tell you that i think this story has GREAT potential. however, its kind of hard to foloow if you get what i am saying. Could you maybe space it differently so people can keep up with who is talking and who isnt?? I am not meaning to be offenseive if it sounds that way either. Can't wait to read the rest!!1 ^_^ |