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kloun mannequin 2008-06-12 . chapter 1
it's as if you survived bad things and you became stronger.
ash the arsnist 2008-05-31 . chapter 1
I've always had a thing for writing about arcade games and you did a great job, the imagery was entertaining. I also like the way you draw the reader through using increments of 30 minutes instead of just jumbling the different games together, it gives it structure. And of course the last two lines tied everything up very nicely. Great job overall. :)
XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-28 . chapter 1
This is so very awsome. Nice job!

xKristie Mariex
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