It's been quite a while since I came back to read this again, but God, it's just as wonderful as when I first read it and had no clue which part was supposed to go first. :P

If there's the epitome of a sweet, short love story, this is it. And it's freaking unique; till now I still haven't seen anyone else using this backwards style.

Hope there's more where this came from. I don't know how long you haven't been updating anything, but if I remember right it's been a while. *narrows eyes pointedly*

Keep writing! ^^

woah.
solid story.
the whole backwards thing was interesting.
i went back i reread everytime i got to the new part.
amazing talent you have.
hope you enjoy writing as mush i did reading this.
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It took me until the third part to figure it was backwards and i thought.. Oh this is backwards like the summary!
it was very interesting the way you did it. i liked it :)
and umm.. the supernatural reference is..? :D

awwss that was just soo sweet and cute! of course they got together at the end right? awwies lol.

Louisa, where's Sam? Hahaha. It's Dean. Did I get it right? The Supernatural reference? :D

Anyways, great one shot. It's so romantic. I like the way you repeat these few lines, 'He couldn’t think of anything to say. His tongue felt thick, the butterflies in his stomach were going schizophrenic, he couldn’t meet her eyes,'

I did! It kind of weirded me out for a second because I was wondering if you were doing that on purpose or not. And...maybe it's still me, but I still don't get the whole cheese walls thing. Anyways, this was interesting. Toodles.

Very interesting! I was a bit confused with the transition between the first and the second part, but then I realized that the whole story is told backwards. I finished reading it and then read it backwards, and both ways is a beautiful piece. Short, sweet and overall lovely. Kudos!

i like this one shot. Keep up your amazing writing! what was the supernatural reference? :P

can somone tell me what its about? Coz i dint understand it one bit...

Dude. This is spiffy to the point of awesomeness :D Ahh, I got the format as soon as I read the summary :) So up my alley. Hehe. I didn't catch the Supernatural reference because I haven't started watching my DVD's yet, but I will get it soon. I hope. HAHA.

Aww, that was adorable. A little confusing, but I think that was what gave it it's awesome charm.
Great job! Loved it :)
-Aria

I love this. Absolutely love this.
But, the part at the very beginning, it did end up happening right?
:] They're so cute together

Ahh, such a wonderful piece. The style is marvelous. I like how you incorporated everyone's feelings; before, during and after.
Schizophrenic butterflies are always a fun thing. ;)

Aah! It took me so long to get your summary :D But once i did it was all good :)
Hehe, you didn't see me sitting there staring at the computer looking puzzled, so sh...

And it also took me a while to process the story (I know, I know, thickhead that I am) but... it was still awesome:D:D:D

It's beautiful writing and it's really creative, starting with an event and leading up to it (backwards!) then finally ending it. I wonder if you wrote the whole thing first and then rearranged it, or if you really did write it in the order it's poster. In any case, it's amazing. I really love this (especially the alternating POVs), and I'm jealous woodstock1969 added this to our c2 before I could. (: