Hi Kim! I favorited you as well. ^_^

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this. It painted a very vivid image in my head while I was reading. Normally I am not fond of this type of work at all, but I really loved this. You've got talent, for sure.

This is very well written, I can clearly picture the creature you described. There are a couple areas where it flows a little lesswell but it's overall better than anything I could have come up with so major kudos. :D

I liked this! =) Erobos would fit in with Greek and Roman mythology quite nicely. Good job. I hope you got a good grade for this poem.
My only problem with it is that sometimes it's wordy and hard to read through. It doesn't always flow smoothly. 'course that may just be how you meant it to be. Kudos to you for the awesome name! =)
~~Lady of the Mirror

Wow, this was very impressive. Illustrating such a creature must've been quite a feat. This result offers plenty of interesting qualities of this "scorn." His personality is incredibly questionable; he may deliver wrath upon humans, but he possess human-like qualities. You described every moment incredibly well; detail after detail appeared to offer a vivid picture of this beast. I could picture it so well.

The third segment did feel epic, but also seemed to blank out what, in my opinion, made him so interesting; his "well-developed intellect and wit." The third segment didn't treat him like a man's fear, but more a wrath-filled monster, which bothered me a bit.

Aside from these gripes, this was very descriptive and full of great picturesque details. It was a fantastic read. I hope your future works follow such vivid suit. Excellent job.