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| Random-Idiocity 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseDark, but very good. I thought you did a great job with your imagery and making everything flow. Keep it Up! |
| lifesjustbegun 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseCasey Jones, So I'm a little confused. Are you suffering from insanity in the poem and you're describing it? Because it sounds a lot like someone with a 106 degree fever. Either way I like it. |