Good chapter with Bella expressing to Mona the truth in what she feels about her mom's new baby.

I'm getting a red light! Fiona is trouble! I can tell, I just hope Noah will be able to soon. And now there's this whole other drama with Noah finding out the truth about Bella's dad. Sophie shouldn't have opened her big fat mouth. I hope Bella doesn't get mad at her. That was also a big step for Jonathan to take. I just hope he really means it. Can't wait for your next chapter! (as usual : )).

Good chapter.

Yay! Jonathan gets to stay with Bella. And Noah attempted to talk with her. At least he's not completely ignoring her. I'm still a bit unsure (to say the least) about this Fiona person though. She's got me suspicious. Glad to see an update. It proves you're still alive and kicking! Or, I guess writing would be a better verb...Anyway. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Good chapter with Georgia agreeing to let Jonathan to live with Bella's family.

Good chapter with Jonathon going to live with Bella's family in order to get away from his abusive father.

Yay! An update! Great chapter! And I know I say that like every time, but I still do mean it. I would say more, but I need to get to bed. School in the morning, and life just keeps getting crazier. Anyway, as usual, I can't wait for the next chapter. It's always nice to get an update for this one. I can't wait to see what unfolds next time. : )

So um... I laughed at Jon's hit an run joke...

I'm interested to see where this new development goes. And to see how his dad will take it... and why would David lose the church and possibly go to jail?

~K3P0

Good chapter where Jonathan tells Bella's dad the truth about his home life.

Yay! An update! I'm not entirely sure I trust this Fiona person. Sometimes she seems okay, but then, it also seems like she's trying to get Noah to hate Bella or something like that. And I'm not sure about the whole thing with her getting all friendly with him. She's over-stepping her boundaries, and it seems like she's taking advantage of Noah's current insecurities. Guess we'll just have to see won't we? Anyway, it's late, it's a Friday, and I'm flippin' exhausted! So I'm going to bed. Nice way to end the day! I'll be a-waitin' for the next chapter! =D

I just finished reading More than Anyone last night, and then I stayed up most of the night reading this story. I am enjoying it so much! You are a talented writer who pulls the reader into the emotions of the characters. Please update soon! :-)

Good chapter.

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“Oh.” Isaac seemed a little sad." - this would sound better if you said something like "Isaac's face fell" to SHOW he was feeling sad, rather than just stating... he seemed a little sad.

Mark and Mona were flirting? It didn't really seem like flirting to me, but then I don't know much... Unless Caroline wasn't being serious...

I love Caroline and David's flirting... they're so cute.

OH...kay. So... I'm actually kind of annoyed with Bella right now, she seems to be REALLY flip-flop indecisive, say one thing and then change your mind the next minute. I mean, she wants to go out with Jonathan, then she doesn't, then she does, then she uses breaking up to get him to say something about his dad's abuse... it seems kind of manipulative and flaky to me.

BUT... it is good that she's not perfect. I just think that maybe you should put some more of her thought process into why she's so flaky with Jonathan, and why she goes back and forth all the time. We haven't really seen a lot of what she's thinking, so since we don't see her internal conflict very much, the thoughts behind the actions, it seems very... um... flaky. lol. I can't think of another word. She basically just seems like she's using Jonathan. Even though she's not.

Anyway... I kind of liked Noah's little breakdown... it kind of made me laugh/sad at the same time, and I liked him more for it.

:D

~K

I knew that whole abuse things was going to come back to be a major problem. And that end scene was very dramatic, probably because I was listening to Remembrances from Schindler's List. I just really hope telling someone will work. It could just make it worse, but you never know. I'm glad we finally get to see things from Noah's point of view, and I have to say I was a little worried when he grabbed the alcohol. Fortunately the worst thing that happened was he got in even more trouble. Anyway, I really need to get my summer reading done, so I'm going to go now. Great chapter!

Nah, his explanation was good enough that it's not cheesy or anything. I think it works well to create a tension there that wasn't really as stressed upon before. Good chapter. Maybe a little slow, but it's a good flow into whatever happens next!

~K