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| Dreaming Chica 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI love this! It shows how you should feel when you find that special someone! I really like how you started off with doubting love, and then ended it with beleiveing in it again! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| kloun doll 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abusethese imageries with moon and love is great. bring a mysterious feeling, like from a fairy tale. |
| Hallie Stunt 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abusethe rhyming in this is awesome and so is the last line, which totally brings everything together |
| lookin4nemo 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseBRILLIANT! i'm personally routing 4 mr. moon light! NEXT BATTLE *loud booming vocie* Mr. moonlight V.S Mr.Sunshine! Who will win Katrina's heart. Who knows what can happen?;p |
| Solstice Of Light 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abusePerhaps it feels a little constricted due to the endless rhyming, but Im impressed that it rhymes for so long in each verse! It nicely tells a story, and since Mr. Moonlight is so perfect, the poems obviously about me, right? :p SoL |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was just lovely, good job. Keep it Up! |
| molotovcocktailontherocks 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet. Love the structure even though the rhyme threw me off a little. Kudos. |
| The Hippie Nerd 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThe first thing that comes to my mind when hearing the title is the song that The Beatles covered, but I like the idea of your one true love being referred to as "Mr. Moonlight." A sweet poem, and the rhyming is well done. Good work! |