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Reviews For: Mr Moonlight

Dreaming Chica
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseI love this! It shows how you should feel when you find that special someone! I really like how you started off with doubting love, and then ended it with beleiveing in it again!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
kloun doll
2008-06-18
ch 1,
abusethese imageries with moon and love is great.
bring a mysterious feeling, like from a fairy tale.
Hallie Stunt
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abusethe rhyming in this is awesome
and so is the last line,
which totally brings everything together
lookin4nemo
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abuseBRILLIANT! i'm personally routing 4 mr. moon light! NEXT BATTLE *loud booming vocie*
Mr. moonlight V.S Mr.Sunshine! Who will win Katrina's heart. Who knows what can happen?;p
Solstice Of Light
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abusePerhaps it feels a little constricted due to the endless rhyming, but Im impressed that it rhymes for so long in each verse!
It nicely tells a story, and since Mr. Moonlight is so perfect, the poems obviously about me, right? :p

SoL
Random-Idiocity
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseThis was just lovely, good job. Keep it Up!
molotovcocktailontherocks
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseVery sweet. Love the structure even though the rhyme threw me off a little. Kudos.
The Hippie Nerd
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseThe first thing that comes to my mind when hearing the title is the song that The Beatles covered, but I like the idea of your one true love being referred to as "Mr. Moonlight." A sweet poem, and the rhyming is well done. Good work!
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