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GRAYTEXT 2008-06-05 ch 2,	abuseThis ending became confusing in the last 4...paragraphs for lack of a better word. I remember that Alex is the vampire, you say he looks twenty years younger, which I follow, but then you have a random young man speaking to both bartender Frank and Alex? Anyway, I liked where you were going with it. I await the alternate ending to decide.
GRAYTEXT 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseNicely written. It's interesting how sexually oriented vampirism is most of the time, something about the exchange of fluids. I wonder if she will turn or if he will come back for her. I guess I'll have to wait for an update to find out. Well done.