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nycgurl9014 2008-06-26 ch 2,	abuseThis story is really good so far and she doesn't seem like that much of a ** to me but that may change after a couple of chapters.
Nicola Guills 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abusehm...very interesting, I like that you went inside the head of the ** instead of the innocent bystander...very interesting. I like. ;) Ciao! -nicola
Eclipsia Soulbird 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseNice summary. Good start. Could be longer, but I likee. ^^ Continue soon, please?
Laeden 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseIt's an interesting start for a prologue. I see it going into more detail, some backround information into the first chapter, perhaps some back-track? Also, first person is an extremely difficult POV to write from. Don't forget to put a lot of personality in there. The little quarks people have become a lot more important in first person than third, espeically sayings that people have, and say all the time. Though there's really not much here to review.
centenarian 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseOkay, this sounds interesting. Yeah...but she's not THAT slutty is she? Because I'm kinda like her. Okay, anyways. Nicely written and its funny so...update soon. You're on alert.