Scary story. I'm sure many can relate to wanting to give into "the monster within". Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Definitely a good portrayal of a female's inner struggle, oh society and your impossible standards.

-Cindy Moon *)

Hm... a roundabout way of hinting at suicide? Was she holding a gun in the end?

Again, you've drawn me in, only to cut it short...

Wow. This is exhilarating and wonderful. There isn't a thing I would change about it. Although, I didn't interpret it according to your author's note. The ending was...amazing (and sad).