Beautiful. Truly. I love the visual of the broken clock. You did a great job on this.

Great poem (and subject matter!). I especially like the rhyming and the way you repeat the first two lines at the end. Nice job!

Nice work. I like the rhyming, and the idea of the poem (I like the notion of "a graveyard song"). Ending the poem with the two lines that started it (my favourite lines in the poem) was also a nice touch. Good job!