Very good, I'll be looking out for the next entry. Sorry I don't have any criticism to give you.

Still looking good, its very interesting a different I think. I'll be reading on...

Only one mistake that I could see, you repeated tree twice, but other then that its good. Its really weird...that he loves his journal so much, but guess he has to because he is alone, Reading on...

First entry is good and no error mistakes. I will have to see where you take Gideon Kane in the next chapters.