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| SilverTwilight 2008-08-02 ch 1,  | abuseThe emotions in this are so vivid, and I like how you move onto different emotions, like the beginning: the calm, then you move onto a sort of building hope, then a climax of hell-fires and frantic waves, then you end it off with waiting. I'm not much good at describing what I mean, but I hope that made sense. The imagery is really great. I'm not sure I get it...who is "they"? I'll re-read it and try to figure it out. -- On a side note, I added a new chapter to my Death Is Just A Dream story, and it's pretty different from the rest so I would really appreciate your opinion. ~ Dx |
| Clarelouise 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseyaay love it! its a very emotional poem, i like the way it has real depth to it by the sometimes disturbing images, not in a horrible way but, tis hard to describe, making u feel something for the poem and the scenes, almost like ur actually there even tho the lines r so short and there are so many different images. well done, a favourite :) |
| MonsterGirl 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuselove the imagery in your poem =) and nice meaning ^^ |