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| Auraya 2008-06-02 ch 1,  | abusewarm fuzzy feeling! warm fuzzy feeling! it's beautiful faerie, just like how I imagined. That's pretty much what I need to say about it! ooh! except I think it was really neat how you had the end the same as the beginning, it reinforced the feeling of it going around in the circle never ending and always peaceful. my poem! hee :D |
| Clarelouise 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseoo this is so beautiful and imaginative! liquid love is uch a cool phrase, amkes me think of happy bubbles lol the phrasing and short lines r rele effective here, it makes it easy to read wen it could b hard with all the descriptiove language, but it rele flows well too, very well handled i think :D i have loved reading these! x |
| Kylie Robbins 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseDude, nice. Quite awesome. |
| thursdays and rain 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abusewonderful descriptions ;) |