it is not boring it is sweet and cute storii

I didn't realize it was a guy's POV until I got to the part where he said she or her or whatever lol
good story, so going in my favorites =]

pretty interesting...i once read some story that had a guy drawing the girl...lol like i said this was interesting :)

This was good. I didn't actually realize it was in a guy's point of view until he said whatever he did about his roommate. Anyway, it was cute. I've read a few of your stories but I think this is the first time I've reviewed. I don't normally review but I noticed your pen name sound familiar, I was like 'hey! let's see if this person has more.' So here I am, liking this one and going to go read the other oneshots I haven't read. Good job

omg awesome ;D

That was such a creative piece! I like how it was from a boy's point of view, and the description. I loved the way they met, and the ending was so sweet! Beautiful job. :)

hey! I might be a little late with the review, but I have to say that it was really good! keep writing!
xx

PS: did you intentionally name the characters after james and maria from Silent Hill 2? Or was that a coincidence? =]

I've been looking for a one-shot from a guy's POV, and wow, you did it well...except for some grammatical errors (particularly between you're and your), it was good...well done!

Oh. My. God. That is AMAZING. No joke. Oh gosh I don't even know where to start, it was incredible. Favourite stories without a doubt! I am so jealous lol you write better than me, no fair. Btw I only realised like half way through that it was guy and the person on the bench was a girl lol haha, but you know how slow I am. LOVE this, it sorta hit the heart.. made me smile out loud :P ..I love the part where he says he knows why he smiles at her at the start, and at the end where he says he's afraid he'll break her hand. And nice use of the quote! :D Chica Xx

i'd been looking for atory in a guy's POV. glad to read yours! :)

Aww! This was so incredibly awesome xD I love it (:

-Katie

Aww! I didn't even know it was a guy's POV until the roommate part. Hahaha, talk about smart. :P

I loved it though! :D

Strawberry xx

Another awsome oneshot!
You are a genius!
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I just read this story and when I finished I realized I was smiling :) Your writing really makes a person feel something ya know?. Keep up the good work.

Very sweet story :)