Very short, very journal-ish. I liked the last three lines a lot. Really great imagery, and "slept in the sunshine" even though it could be literal is very pretty wording that could be interpreted in many ways. I liked this, good job.

Simple, but elegant. I liked the short lines, and sometimes fragmented sentences. The ending kind of made me smile without really thinking about it. It had really nice imagery. I liked it a lot.