Very refreshing. Compared to the usual 'new, dork girl' fad, I mean.

I was actually looking for stories like these. Glad to know good ones existed. Keep writing!

LOVED THE PLOT AND THE NARRATION. But personally, I felt like it needs more heart-tugging moments to make it more... sweet. And the Jennaleese part could be more suspenseful-like and dramatic... I really like your idea how "normal girls" can't get to get the guys they had/wanted/want because some weird girl took him. Although I'm tall, flat-chested and self-depreciating (your first "cliche weird girl") I can totally sympathize with your view, which is good. :) Lol, and I also realized that the examples you chose are from the love stories in fictionpress.. right? :)) Or maybe just a coincidence? :)

Aww. :)

I like your take on 'the other girl'. It's an interesting concept.

"You told me your mother was dead...to make yourself more interesting?" Best line ever! It made me laugh so hard :D Your writing style is really good and, while I may be too lazy to review every single one of your stories, I intend to read and enjoy them all :)

Yeah, I'm kind of stalking your stories at the moment. I saw this and I thought to myself 'Hm...I haven't read a het story in SO long. I should give this a try' and it was the PERFECT story to get me back into a 'het mood' (I've been reading slash way too much xD). It was just so cute and adorable and I absolutely loved this line: "If this was a romance novel I'd have some retarded name, like Jake or Conner." So true xD I laughed my head off at that. Anyway, I really loved this! :D

Aw, this was so well-written and so lovely and so cute and so aw. I love the way you write, how the narrator's thoughts flow so naturally, and how everything she says is so relateable and true. And what Ian says isn't all cheesy romance novel-esque, and it's sweet, but realistic, you -can-imagine-him-saying-that-actually sweet.

Aw :D

Love it!

Very cute :)

Freaking hell that was brilliant

I love it

So non cliche but cliche wheez :D

This is so cute I don't know why more people didn't review it!

Seriously.

I like the main character.

I am sick of the insecure, shy, inner beauty protagonist myself.

Keep writing!

sweet. :)

sweet.

Brilliant story! I loved it :)

this is so sweet :) my name is angela, so i was pleasantly surprised to find a oneshot with my name as the protagonist's. now all i need is an ian ;) sigh, only in my dreams, lol x]

great job!

aw how cute )