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The Hippie Nerd
2008-07-17
ch 1,
abuseA fascinating poem, I'm almost at a loss of words as to what to say about it... Almost feels twisted and askew, but it's extremely engaging throughout. There's a beauty to the ugliness, it stays with you long after finishing reading it. Bravo!
McKinley Cooper
2008-06-14
ch 1,
abuseI've never heard that point of view before. I've known people who feel that way--a badge of honor. It is inside someone's head, reading it like a newspaper.
Astounding art!

McKinley
simpleplan13
2008-06-14
ch 1,
abuseI like this because it's an interesting point of view. I also love the descriptions because they are unique and really pretty. The only thing I might say is some punctuation might help the piece. Other than that really great job!


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Johannas mirror
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is the most...touching, revolting, mesmerizing poem. I love it and I hate it, but I'm supposed to aren't I? I'm loath to find you've put something so horrible into such a beautiful poem, but it's good, it's very good.

~Jo
ArgentumAtelier
2008-06-01
ch 1,
abuseI guess I can understand why people think of abuse when they read this, but what comes to mind for me is merely a love so fierce you can't hold back. It isn't a bad thing necessarily if you're sore the day after, or for a few days.
painted eyes
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abusehmm... I've never looked at ...well.. i presume domestic abuse... in that light before.

Very beautifully written...

Hope things are OK with you.

~painted
the face in the window
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abusethis is beautiful, although i'm not sure if i'm correct on what it's about. everything okay on your end?

rowan.
Shasta Valentine
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abusewhen i think of this poem, i think of the novel "Twilight".
excellent adjective use, and your imagery was splendid.
great topic too, you executed it well.

-sv
SirScott
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abuseNot sure what to say about this one. But it is interesting.

~SirScott
destinee's notebook
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abuseIt's a take on what I assume is...well, something like domestic abuse? It's a different way to go about it since I never thought about it that way, but this is written very nicely.
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