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| The Hippie Nerd 2008-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseA fascinating poem, I'm almost at a loss of words as to what to say about it... Almost feels twisted and askew, but it's extremely engaging throughout. There's a beauty to the ugliness, it stays with you long after finishing reading it. Bravo! |
| McKinley Cooper 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI've never heard that point of view before. I've known people who feel that way--a badge of honor. It is inside someone's head, reading it like a newspaper. Astounding art! McKinley |
| simpleplan13 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI like this because it's an interesting point of view. I also love the descriptions because they are unique and really pretty. The only thing I might say is some punctuation might help the piece. Other than that really great job! PS. If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
| Johannas mirror 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is the most...touching, revolting, mesmerizing poem. I love it and I hate it, but I'm supposed to aren't I? I'm loath to find you've put something so horrible into such a beautiful poem, but it's good, it's very good. ~Jo |
| ArgentumAtelier 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI guess I can understand why people think of abuse when they read this, but what comes to mind for me is merely a love so fierce you can't hold back. It isn't a bad thing necessarily if you're sore the day after, or for a few days. |
| painted eyes 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abusehmm... I've never looked at ...well.. i presume domestic abuse... in that light before. Very beautifully written... Hope things are OK with you. ~painted |
| the face in the window 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful, although i'm not sure if i'm correct on what it's about. everything okay on your end? rowan. |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abusewhen i think of this poem, i think of the novel "Twilight". excellent adjective use, and your imagery was splendid. great topic too, you executed it well. -sv |
| SirScott 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseNot sure what to say about this one. But it is interesting. ~SirScott |
| destinee's notebook 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseIt's a take on what I assume is...well, something like domestic abuse? It's a different way to go about it since I never thought about it that way, but this is written very nicely. |