Reviews for Shiny Glass Bottle

The Hippie Nerd 2008-07-21 ch 1,	abuseA really interesting rant, but a poetic rant- I liked it. There are some really great lines and wonderful imagery in some parts. I can't recall all my favourites... "They slip inside and slide between your cheeks Thrashing up against your fat" "But f can only end in ucking Like sh can only end in it" Humourous and relatable, quite liked that one! "She's got her own sins tucked between her sheets I've got my own lies licking at my knees" Very poetic. A good poem overall, nice job!
Raistlin Majere 2008-06-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseI detect a lot of analogy, but that could just be superstition. This is among my favorites of your most recent poems, and that's saying something; I don't pick favorites. Excellent work.
the face in the window 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abuse"But f can only end in ucking Like sh can only end in it" that kind of sums my life up at some points. good poem.
SirScott 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseNice poem. Good message the last line really speaks volumes. ~SirScott