Reviews for Shiny Ribbons - FictionPress.com

bijake1901 2008-07-15 ch 1,	abuseis this about some fetus?
Alphabetical Dreams 2008-05-31 ch 1,	abuseWow... That's so pretty. I especially like the last three lines; Such a great visual!! Good job... keep up the great work!! Live, laugh, love. Creating a Dream
Ashelin 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseI like the last line. Maybe it's because one of my favorite phrases is "Hello world" as if you're greeting it in some defiance, or perhaps not even that. Just greeting it to say hi, to make yourself known to it and it to you. I'm an odd one, that's sure, but that's what I thought of when I read that line. The rest of the poem was good of coures, I liked the last four lines the best I must say. They felt newer than the ones before, less cliche and more fresh. Not what's buried under six feet of what's been going on forever. Good job on this.