Great job at description. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~

Okay, I'm interested.

This was well-written, and the building suspense was wonderful. I'm really looking forward to the future of this. The box and the woman mentioned weaves an interesting mystery.

Good job, and good luck writing!

-Hikari Adams

I'm intrigued. o-o nice descriptions!

I kind of want to know what's in this box. Seriously. Continue, please?