I read the rewrite but because it wasn't finished I read this... I have to admit that do far the rewrite is way better. So congrats I guess on improving it so much and as you're writing just for some advice this story seems to move way too fast, and isn't very descriptive. So good pick with your writing :) I love the storyline though it had me hooked enough to continue reading

GREAT STORY :)

update soon!

very good work thankyou :)

OK love this story to death! But is the little sister's name Carrie or Cassie because it seems to switch

I like the story so far but I feel that Emma would question why he wanted to protect her so much. You know what I mean?

This is awesome! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I noticed that it isn't marked as complete, so could you please update?

OH MY GENUIS!

AW. What a cute chapter! I give major Kudos! I love this story! I hope it's not ending, by the sound of it, it is ending? hahaha. Anywasy, update soon!

this is an amazing story! i cant wait to read more so please please please update as soon as you can! the only problem i have with the story is i dont think she would have just lleft her sister but i guess im glad she did and the story turned out better for it. thanks for writing!

I know I saw that your story was finished on another site...I read it

awesome update :) what's the name of the other site?

Good job, keep it up

If the car was out of gas, why on earth would she be wanting jumper cables? If you're out of gas, you want more gas. Not a charge on your battery.

great job on it