lol:D the end was perfect!

The thing I've loved most in the story is the conversation. You really have a knack in them. I think you should be a screenwriter with this potential.

However, your details.. are so... girlishly... puke-y? I don't mind half of them but it's so... random. Although I did get that the narration was a main character who was really random and since it's her narration, it could be random, it was a bit... hard to read. I would have liked more details, more coherent thoughts, more organized and transition in between thoughts.

But thanks for your fic. It made me laugh lots of times. :)

Haha, that's funny! Love Brandon, maybe do an epilogue? Or a sequel?

Aww this story is so funny and cute :))

Cute! I loved the ending! Very nice job with this story. :)

Hahaha.

Aw. I am definitely liking this so far.

Bra sizes really shouldn't matter. :) Cute idea for a story. Going to read more now...

A brilliant start. I can't wait to read the rest.

-AG :)

Amusing and cute! xD Nice work! 8D

Hehe. Uh-oh. :D

-Harlow

hee hee hee. I can't help but wonder where this is going.

-Harlow

LOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT!

-Harlow

THIS IS AWESOME. Love it.

-Harlow

DUN DUN DUN! Loved it!

-Harlow