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| The Typo Queen 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseGreat job. I really like it! : ) |
| Ernest Bloom 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseAhh...Didn't David Bowie...? M...How about some concrete imagery? Rhyme/meter good, just nothing that stays with you. |