|Reviews for Often the Skies, they gloriously shining|
| roguespirit 1/23/13 . chapter 1
A nice feely piece. I'm just not sure about how you divided one of the verses:
"As though they possessed the candour of
Thine eyes! I lament the heirless King"
I'm not sure why you moved "Thine eyes!" to the next verse cause ending a verse with "of" doesn't come of right to me. It's possible I'm not reading it correctly and I appologize if that's the case, just that you put effort into reviewing my story so I thought I'd off some helpful critique if I could.
| marcus 6/5/08 . chapter 1