Wow. Simply enthralling and brilliant. Firstly, every story with a captivating plot is catchy and then to orchestrate it with pure brilliant style of writing is simply outstanding or even a masterpiece among various works.
This story was captivating from the beginning to the start. There isn't much room left to offer improvement critic.
I loved how you described every emotion that ran through Fujima's vein, her heart, the drum of her soul. It truthfully left a tingling sensation to the reader. I almost felt the burn on my own neck. It was real, it was emotional, and dark.
And you're right, lol, recently everywhere I go I hear about vampires. I'm sure if you like vampires you've encountered the Twilight series. The story was gripping and great. In my opinion one of your best works yet, but we'll have to see about that as I can see you have posted more wonderful things. So till later ;) Great job once again.

NEAT! Very interesting, i don't think I've read something like this before... Very ominous from the start, kinda had a passionate dark touch to it, leading to a fragile destruction at the end ^_^ SCHWET

I'm a little confused at the end tho... did he smash the glass cup against her head?? Or did he jump out the window...??

Regardless, it's pretty good