Oh wow, I read for 2 hours straight! I completely l-o-v-e the story! It's fantastic althought at first, I thought Jack and Lindsey's relationship started a bit too fast.

It was well progressed though and the plot was very typical in a good way. I'm off the read the sequel now!

Oh and is the ending based off of the song 'When It All Falls Apart' by The Veronicas? :]

Great job with the story!

-Spazzlex

Oh my gosh!! That was so amazing! I feel soo bad for Lindsey! I can't wait to start reading your sequel! yay! excited! :)

That was really awesome!

This story was awesome.
After finishing this one..
i was so shocked of the ending..
and i wanted more..
but then i heard there was a sequel..
i almost cried..

Love you stories..
please update the sequel soon.

I want you to write a lot more! please keep writing. I am highly anticipating more of your awesome story.

i love your story=) hurry and add more to your story!

oh
this is so cute!
i LOVE it!

Well That was unexpected.
Fifteen?
Woah.
Anywayz pretty good!

this story is cool :D, i hav a few questions and comments first of all my name is lindsey too!! with an E even!! and secondly i love chiodos!! and is this story about you? or is it jus a daydream or wat? nyways its awesome :D

ah!
okay that chapter was really good,
but what happened next?
write more soonisk!

It's ok that this chapter's short. It's still a great story. Just, please write again soon.

oh wow! This story is quite original! Dang I wish stuff like this happened to me, lol! anyways, props to you!

yay!
so good
write more soonish please
is so pretty!
love the part with the ring!

YAY!

ooh fun! christmas and cake making.
i just love how in this story,
jack and lindsey are so cute together.
he treats her so good.
keep rolling out the chapters!
(please)