Reviews for The Glass Pumpkin

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cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-23 ch 4,	abuseNice chapter. Alex seems a bit-- off. Do people really go that crazy or move that quickly? Well, maybe they do. Poor Will, either way.
Faith Adeline 2008-06-21 ch 4,	abuseaw, she's so innocent and naive-I love it! The whole Alex thing saying, I'll you get you and your little friends too! was a bit cheesy, but still quite hilarious. And be careful about povs, cause when Will was ranting it switched to first person for a brief moment. Keep it up and update soon, can't wait for more :) Faith
jammi 2008-06-21 ch 4,	abuseHuh, well it is karma in a way since that's what Derek basically did to that last guy his sister did, but on the other hand karma shouldn't be hitting Will since she was the one being a good friend, lol. Huh, well... if she was going to 'lose' her virginity despite how much she dislikes David at least it wasnt to some homeless guy, lol. And the fact that her friends are assuming it's all true is sad, I hope she brings this up as a way to show to her friend that it's good she broke up with crybaby Alex, no morals. But then,this might be the norm for her since it is the way her brother acts, lol, which might actually be the best proof for not dating him since, you know, he's like her brother. Ew. "you stupid lying liar." and "you stupid idiot" are the best insults, haha, based on the fact that when you're upset in real life and you don't swear that is what you say, a bit childish, hahah, but in the heat of the moment it gets the point across and I like the fact that she didn't get witty at a time like this but instead regressed to about third grade level, lol. You slipped into first person at one point in Will's rant. Last sentence of this paragraph; "“You’re in a lot of trouble, you stupid idiot. I can’t believe I listened to you because look where it’s gotten me! I actually thought I was doing Charlotte a favor but this was all part of your plan wasn’t it? Sick Alexander Pinkerton on me. Well, bravo Derek Nathaniel Vanderbilt. Making me Alexander Pinkerton’s public enemy number one was an excellent idea because he seems quite capable of destroying my life! It’s all over the Internet.” I was breathing hard by the time I was finished." lmao, I wonder why Edward wants to avoid the females in that little slice of heaven? hahah, I really like the way you're interspersing the fairy tale aspect of the story into everything, even though that's a fantastical part of it it's believable, and I really enjoy the set up that you've taken the time to create at the moment. Especially the fact that other creatures hate fairies, lol. I'm extrememly interested in finding out Will's reaction to some little blonde woman who has an aura of 'love and happiness' around her telling her that she's her fairy godmother, minus wings, who has come to find her her true love, lol. Oh, and LOL at your portrayal of Red Riding hood, hahah, a serial wolf killer and the bystander affect, hahah, nice.
Gemma 2008-06-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseI love how cute Edward and Faye are and that Faye is so innocent to everything like cars. Update soon!
Gemma 2008-06-21 ch 3, anon.	abuseHehe. Really like it.
Faith Adeline 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abusehaha I love this story! It's so funny and cute! Keep it up and update soon :) Faith
cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuseFunny! I love how Faye doesn't understand anything that's going on... and I wonder what guy IS good enough for Charlotte-- both for herself, and to pass muster with her brother and friend... update soon, please!
jammi 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuseI honestly think I adore this story, I was iffy at first because people tend to mess up the whole fairy tale aspect when they blend it but this is so cute! Like, it's not cute but it is cute, haha. I love the name-dropping and the tone and yeah, I can't think of anything constructive to say, but I really do think this story will become one of my faves, especially based on it's uniqueness.
flowerbush 2008-06-18 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'm only on chapter 1 right now, but I know this is going to be one of those stories that just sucks you into it (like the portal!). Your plot is so clever, and I loved the detail about Santa Claus. -Jessie
cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-15 ch 2,	abuseThis is good. I like the characters, and the details, like that Will is allergic to cats, or the numbers for dates. I know you said it's a guilty pleasure, but it's lighthearted and sweet. Update soon!
gregarious glenda 2008-06-08 ch 2, anon.	abuseha ha. mad hatter is funny. likey the chp alot!
Trmpetplaya1 2008-06-08 ch 2,	abuseum, okay, so like, you totally need to keep writing this. totally. i love it! i think you write the mad hatter very well (even though he only had like two lines) and i've always been a fan of the portrayal of arrogant males. i like your main character a lot; as one who pretends she has no emotions, i enjoy reading about those that cannot contain them. keep writing! and congrats on graduating!
naadz 2008-06-08 ch 2,	abusei think this story is going to be interesting..are they going to be alot of characthers?
Freddi 2008-06-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like the beginning. I'm a sucker for these types of stories with the fairy tale theme. Hopefully you update soon so I can review again and read more. :) Sincerely, Freddi J
gregarious glenda 2008-06-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseawesome awesome. i like a lot.

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