Okay, your imagery is honestly just SO amazing. I'm kind of blown away by it. Like I feel like I can see all of this. Honestly this poem is just so real to me, for some reason. I really like your description of the caged firl, and how she had sand dollars in her pockets. And I like how all your speech is in italics cause it doesn't break the flow of the poem like I think quotation marks would do.

Lulz, Amber. Epic, epic lulz.
That is all I have to say, except that the fountains really do need to be acidic green. It's more dark and evil.

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Falcon

Stunning imagery! I really liked this piece; it was very unique!