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| clumsybella15 2008-06-01 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. I like it, the way you describe her breath and her words scarring themselves on his neck. Beautiful. The last line is simple yet powerful. Next time, try doing the same except for someone who's deaf, just an idea. |