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| MistyRose14 2008-06-02 ch 2,  | abusechouette! kind of short, but that's good because you want to keep the pace fast and light for humor. i wonder if Damian will ever give up... i don't know, he seems really stubborn - but Andrea is too, which gives me the feeling that they would be good together (if he ever changed his perverted ways). bon travail - and keep it up! |
| MistyRose14 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abusehehe, nice! this is pretty great - i like the light teasing but at the same time, the tension of the dislike Andrea has for Damian. so, i'm guessing that this takes place in America? if it does, that's cool (just wanted to make sure i've got the setting correct). i'm glad that you pm'd me to put this in the c2, and i'd love to read more! |